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James C. Bernthal
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Posted on Monday, May 02, 2005 - 4:11 pm:   Edit Post Delete Post View Post/Check IP Print Post    Move Post (Moderator/Admin Only) Ban Poster IP (Moderator/Admin only)
Hello everyone,
I've started on a ten-part serial; a fictional short story in which Sherlock Holmes unmasks Jack the Ripper (Provincial? I think not!) I'd like you to tell me:
a) how accurate I am, and:
b) who you think "dunnit".

you have to visit www.jamescbernthal.tk then click "short stories", then "THE ADVENTURE OF THE WHITECHAPEL FIEND". I'd appreciate all your expert views!
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Assassinboy
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Posted on Thursday, October 27, 2005 - 12:44 pm:   Edit Post Delete Post View Post/Check IP Print Post    Move Post (Moderator/Admin Only) Ban Poster IP (Moderator/Admin only)
Hi There

Ive read the first three parts and the story so far's ok, it clips along at a fair pace.

Minor point - Watson makes a disparaging remark about prostituties in part 1, eg theyre not worth bothering about. From what i know of watson, this would seem a bit strong for his character.
As you acknowledge later on, its Holmes whos down on women, rather than the good Doctor

I look forward to reading the rest

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